Monday, May 24, 2010

Austyns response to his blog 3, 4,5

Blog #3
I like how austyn goes in to depth with some of the characters
I think he should work on feeling and using his sense for the character

Blog #4
I like how he takes on the perspective of mrs dubose and tells the reader how she feels about atticus and the characters in the books.
he describes with thought
Austyn you should work on grammer a bit and adding more information

Blog #5
I like how you add a enthusiasm to your blog.
I like how you describe the details in that chapter.
I think you should work on cooling down the enthusiasm because you use it than you go low with your tone than high than low. I think you should change with one tone.

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